I don't know what you mean by "need to work on faces" because this is absolutely beautiful. The composition and layout is incredible, in my humble opinion. I love the gray-scale -- I think it adds a lot of depth to a picture that would have been just okay with full color. I love the blowing hair as well. But truly, my favorite thing about this work is the emotion in the face. There is such sadness and fear which can be extremely difficult to convey in a profile shot. I instantly added this to my Favourites and I am going to add you to my +Watch as well. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.